1) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FDez9GtoBtU&t=20s
2) People told me I needed more facts and needed to be more clear in my delivery. The facts idea was the most constructive.
3) I spoke more clearly to get my message across better and added more facts about my cause.
Hey Rob,
ReplyDeleteI am glad you took someones feedback about adding in more facts. I think facts can be key to an elevator pitch for they can make it more dynamic and influential. However, I believe the link you added is faulty. It may just be my computer but I was lead to an empty YouTube browser with an error message. Maybe look into re-adding the link so we are redirected to the video.
Thanks,
Michelle
Hey Rob,
ReplyDeleteThe link you provided is an empty link that does not work. Based on your second point I was excited to see how much you changed your elevator pitch from the first one. You can try updating your blog post, so you can receive some feedback that can make your pitch better.
Sincerely,
Wisnov