1) Elevator Pitch #3
2) It was expressed to me that I should be more clear in my speech so I tried to enunciate my words better this time around. Some feedback said that some of my statistics were irrelevant so I took it into cosideration, however, I didn't necessarily agree with it.
3) I worked on being clearer in my speech and cutting back on information that wasn't exactly necessary. I also was more direct with my idea and spent less time explaining small details. I also found myself more confident in my idea leading to me being more confident in my delivery in front of the camera.
Hey Rob,
ReplyDeleteI am glad you were able to take your last feedback and use it in your new elevator pitch. I can definitely see the difference in how you were able to articulate your ideas in this pitch. It was more clear and I believe more effective than the other two. Continue to keep up the great work!
Wisnov
Hey Rob,
ReplyDeleteI think a common theme for most of us is that we are significantly more comfortable pitching our opportunity because we have continued to develop it more and more. This comfort and in depth development really shows through during your pitch and it seems to me like you have made a significant amount of progress since the first one.
Thanks,
Michelle